LEAP OF FAITH
He looks across the canyon
He sees no way to traverse
He looks up the cliff for a rope
Seeing none, he starts to curse
He walks madly up and down
Feeling stressed and feeling low
He picks up stones and pebbles
Down the canyon he will throw
He thinks he has lost everything
There is nothing left to love
He sits down and starts to weep
And then he hears a voice from above
“Take a look at what you’ve done”
“I’ve done nothing, I’m no help” he cries
“You’ve done more than you think
Now stop and dry your eyes”
He sits there ignoring the voice
Any help he wants is out of reach
“Stand up, do not cut me out
There is more for you to teach”
He looks up, and shakes his head
“I teach nothing! Open your ears!
If you think I’m a help,
Where have you been all these years?”
“You have not wanted me.
You did not want to believe
I would not come to you
When you think I would deceive.”
He wipes his eyes and stands
There is truth in all these words
He sees his camera and frowns
That wasn’t there, this is absurd
The camera is big and is not his
It’s different to the one he owns
It shows him taking photos
Even picking up the stones
He sees something on the photo
And now knows he will be safe
He walks to the edge of the canyon
He is rewarded with his leap of faith
He carefully crosses the gap
He knows he can see his friends
As he reaches the other side I wake
And I have no idea how this ends.
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As a great many of you know, I had a bit of a meltdown yesterday. I am normally a lot stronger than that and if I do meltdown, I don’t do it in public. As a result of that “internal crisis” I had this as a dream last night. It wasn’t a poem in the dream, but it was all there.
Thank you, all of you for your kind words of encouragement and support in my moment of weakness. I really do appreciate it.
So beautiful Alastair. So very real and personal. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for taking the time to go back and read it. I appreciate it
Wonderful poem..Loved it:)
Thank you Praveena 🙂
Beautifully written, Alastair
Thank you
Nice words.
Thank you Kim
I loved this! Thank you for sharing.
Thank you 🙂 And thanks for visiting
Beautiful poem. I love it.
Thank you David
I agree with Penny, you should write more poetry. 🙂
🙂 Thanks
(((((((((((((((((My Dear Bro)))))))))))))))))) welcome back into our fold and know you can count on me and Jem if you need us ok? Love ya xxxx
Thank you very much Roxi 🙂
We all have very bad moments in life, Alastair. There’s just no way any normal human being can be perfectly poised and verbally fluent. I think you’re going through a tough time right now with your uncle’s recent death. You have no reason to apologize, but I feel you – like many of us – use art as a means of coping.
Thank you Alejandro. Your support has been appreciated
I’m so glad you’re still here! I know things can get overwhelming sometimes. And if you ever need to take a break from blogging, just to clear your head, we’ll be here when you’re ready to come back. {{{Hugs}}
Thank you Carissa
A message from on high? You are blessed indeed Alastair. So glad you are feeling better today. Have been praying for you.
Thank you very much. I do appreciate it.
This is beautiful and inspirational. I’m glad you are continuing your blog.
Sincerely,
Jaded
Thank you Jaded. I really appreciate it
It happens Alastair. I kinda’ was on overload yesterday too. Must have been something in the air.
But – c’mon – you know what happens next…
We’re all there ready to catch you & partay! 😉
Thank you Rosy. Definitely going to be a party time. I may be going to one on Friday actually. Eek
Wow, that’s quite a dream! Dream analysts would have an interesting time with that one Alastair. As for me. I love your poem, and am very very happy that you are writing more and more original pieces. As for the rest, well, one day at a time, think well of yourself, enjoy the day your in, oh, and know you are muchly loved. Cuz you are! 🙂 xo (summing things up here!)
I had problems myself analysing it. I got my dream book out but haven’t read it yet.
Thank you for the poem comment. I just started writing it as I remembered the dream. I think the hardest part was trying to put onto paper how I saw the dream and how it made me feel.
Thank you greatly for all of your support Penny. I appreciate it a great deal
That’s what friends are for, you know! 🙂
And I am eternally grateful that you are one of mine
🙂 and I you!
🙂
Endings are just new beginnings. Everything comes in cycles and circles.
All that we are, are just pieces, and each piece has it’s place.
Finding friends is a start, befriending yourself is there too.
Take each step, gain strength and keep going!
Thank you Jules. Being a friend to myself is something I have never been able to do.
Probably why I try to help other people
No matter who we are, Alastair, and how strong we are, we are human. We all have limits and reach them from time to time, some more often than others. Hugs and here is to better days.
Thank you T-Lee. (Went searching your blog for your name lol)
I appreciate your support.
And I appreciate the effort of you getting to know me 🙂
🙂
it spoke to me Alastair, I could swear it was my own thoughts
Thanks Terry 🙂
Very nice poem, Alastair!
I am so glad because now you feel good and you get over the crisis!
Have a wonderful evening, Alastair! 🙂
Thank you Stefania. I appreciate that.
Enjoy your weekend
AMAZing! Meltdowns help us build-up strength. We are all meant to feel and this created more than a smile and chills, you uplifted and reminded me ….
Thank you, alWays.
Thank You Katrina. I have always wanted to help people. So when I crashed yesterday and I had so many people giving me encouragement, and comments like yours, it makes me realise that I am making a difference to people’s lives.
I thank you Katrina for your support
Listen you! Are you listening? Lol You show support and encouragement to many people! You melt down anytime you want!! 🙂 hugs Paula. Xxx
Thank you Paula
Beautiful and inspiring poem. There is hope!!! We get up, look up, open our eyes and see the beauty around us and we believe. No matter what happens we know that we are empowered to fix the things that we can and work around the things we cannot fix 🙂 Keep strong and hopeful!
Thank you Pat
Welcome 🙂