Every week the lovely Rochelle gives us a photo that has been donated to her for us to write a story or poem in 100 words or less. Not as easy as it sounds.
If you want to have a go, then click on the Friday Fictioneers image, and if you want to read what others have written, then click on the froggy.
Oscar bought a bouquet of flowers and skipped a little as he left the florist. Heading home on the bus with a grin on his face, his mind went back to an evening of passion with Wendy. He remembered all the things she did to him, and his breath caught at some of the moments.
His mind stuck in the evening, he missed his stop and had to walk a fair way home. He stopped as he noticed a familiar vehicle in his driveway. It was Wendy’s car. She was visiting his wife. He knew there would be fireworks now.
Haha! Great story, with a nicely timed ending!
I’m tempted to say, “Poor Oscar!” when really I should be chastising him most severely in a moralistic way.
(Forgive my late response, but I’m computer-less. Using my husband’s computer right now. Mine is kaput.)
I know what a broken computer is like. Thanks. 🙂
Oh dear. I like the matter-of-fact way you tell this.
Thanks Emily 🙂
Hahah – loved the story!
Thanks Dahlia 🙂
Ruh roh….
Haha Yep indeed
Oh great twist Al. Didn’t think he’d have a wife. There will certainly be fireworks btw girlfriend, wife, and the main character — a married man. Great write!
Thanks Mandi I don’t think things are going to go well for him.
Laughed aloud.
Love it, you old dog!
Haha I do try. Thanks CE
“Oh hey, Wendy! What brings you here?”
Heh, just casually ask the question whilst quaking in his boots.
Yes! I believe he is doomed! As he should be!
Yep. No way out for him on this one.
I think I would have left before the firework… He’s doomed anyway, and it might be less painful to leave.
Haha yep. Run away. Always start somewhere else.
Wonder if the ladies are planning their revenge. 🙂
Either way, it is not going end well for him.
Now that is a story I want to read, you have to write the rest of this some day.
Thanks Charlie, I may well do.
haha An engrossing prompt and love the picture.
Thank you Vishal 🙂
Oh dear this is going to be the fireworks of all time.
It’s definitely not going to be pretty.
Busted…and so he should be. Great take on the picture. Yes, there will be firework indeed.
Thank you 🙂
Ohhh dear. Looks like karma caught up with Oscar. Great writing 😀
Hehe Thanks Jade.
And there I was thinking, nice romance. 😀 Great twist, great take, and now I know for whom he bought these flowers. They’ll be slapped in his face, I’m afraid.
And that would be the polite version lol
Fantastic!
Thanks Morgan 🙂
Oscar’s in line for a rocket, I suspect. Good one.
Just slightly 🙂
Be sure your sins will find you out!
Ain’t that the truth 🙂 Thanks Clare
Ha, hope Oscar gets what he deserves, that jerk!
I don’t think there is any way this is going to end with a good result for him.
Dear Al,
Nice use of the prompt. Yeah, Oscar’s got some ‘splaining to do. Good one.
Shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Rochelle 🙂 I don’t think he’s going to be able to talk his way out of this one.
Naughty, naughty Oscar. Can’t help feeling a certain amount of comeuppance is about to slam him in the head. Great tale 🙂
I always smile when a cheater gets their just desserts. Thanks Lynn.
Absolutely! Glad he was caught out. Now for the fireworks 🙂
I remember when I found out my ex-wife had cheated (the second time) One of the reasons for the ex lol
Can’t imagine how tough that was. So sorry that your story comes from such a difficult experience. All the best
It was eight years ago, things have moved on since then 🙂
Glad to hear it. A part of your life best over 🙂
Yep. Best thing out of it was that I kept the kids 🙂
That’s lovely – for both you and the kids 🙂
Ha, great twist. Think he’s in a spot of bother….!
Just slightly. Serves him right for cheating.
Just slightly 🙂 Thanks Iain.
Ahhhh. Good twist!
Thank you 🙂