The new Chain Writing Game is live and going. Woohoo. Take a look here at the start.
“I have.” A voice said from behind him.
Dennis turned around and saw a woman standing there. She looked to be about 5’8 with heels, and made up with far too much make up, and the brunette hair looked like a wig. He thought she looked like a hooker, but looks can always be deceiving.
“Where did you see her?” he asked. “She hasn’t had her insulin today, and if she doesn’t have it, she could die”.
“What’s it worth?” the brown-haired woman asked.
“I only have $75 on me. Please you can have it all.” He handed the money over to her.
A Mixed Bag 
This is good add to the intrigue.
Thank you 🙂
Already the urgency to find her is increased! On to the next part…
Thanks 🙂
Oh man. You throw a wrench into the works right off. Love it! I have a feeling that woman doesn’t need that money. Good one, Al!
Thanks Eric 🙂 I haven’t checked back today after episode 5. Will look tomorrow 🙂
Well being a diabetic I know where this could go for the poor girl. Hope he finds her in time! Great twist Al.
Thanks Jackie. I wasn’t sure if I had gone over the top by saying that about the diabetes. I know very little about it.
Well if we don’t get our insulin on a regular basis we are in deep trouble. First its the sweats and shakes, then it’s like we are drunk, we slur words, then pass out and eventually a coma, then death. So yeah, you done good. 🙂
Eek 😦 That’s not good. Thank you
The twists come early this week, I see 😉 Way to give us a clock, Al! Great addition!
Thanks JM. Looking forward to how this pans out.
Just posted mine. Desperation is the word of the day 🙂
Thanks for that. Going to pop to your blog now, and I think it’s about time I followed you 😆
Tsk, tsk 😉 You mean you haven’t! *sigh* Well, better late than never 😀 Seriously though, thanks!
I find it difficult following loads of people. I already follow 750+ so i tend to only follow people who comment regularly now. 🙂
That’s qite a twist ! I was reading all the entries and your twist has given the story a whole new look 😉 Love it.
Thanks Lala 🙂 I love the way Joe has taken it
Yes I love it too 🙂
Al you are masterful at adding conflict. I wanted to wait a bit to add my first, but I think this is the right time.
Thanks Joe. I look forward to seeing your piece
Al, just saying happy New Yr to you and all your followers and friends
Thanks Mak. Have a great 2014.
She’s diabetic? What a twist already!
Charging for information when a woman’s life is a risk! Oh you sleazy maybe hooker! haha
Great start Al, you have really given us a direction with this post 😀
Thank you 🙂 I wanted to give a reason for the panic, and yeah – she’s awful for doing that, but if he loves her, he will pay whatever price.
Panic set up very well! This is one reason I love chain writing, because I would never have thought of herb eing diabetic!
Let’s hope $75 is enough then 😛
Let’s hope so. It could be enough for what I edited out. 😉
To much info *shudders* eugh
haha
Yeah, I’m going to edit that comment and take all that out. Don’t want to give ideas to others