Sunday Photo Fiction is a weekly photo challenge with the prompt used to create flash fiction with something around the 100-200 word mark (not set in stone though). If you wish to have a go, pop over and take a look. Challenge runs from Sunday 4am to Sunday 4am – UK time.
Another Illegal Entry?
Malvin’s idea of fun differed completely to that of his companion. For a fun night out, Malvin liked to head for the pub and sing a few bars down at the karaoke, albeit very badly now, but his friend thought of something he referred to as “more fun”, the kind of fun he put behind him several years ago.
Muttering to himself, Malvin slid a library card down beside the lock of the door and hearing a click, gently pushed it open. Crouching down, he crept slowly in and saw the case with the crown, sceptre and jewels on the table.
Malvin slipped behind a sofa being careful not to touch anything, whilst his cohort stood at the door, keeping watch. He stealthily made his way to the table and looked over the case, his hand a hair’s breadth from the glass. Feeling nothing, he gently took a glove off, making sure not to touch anything. He held his hand near the glass again, and feeling no air from anywhere, he frowned and sat back on his haunches.
His companion turned the light on, strode across the room and unlocked the case with a key.
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Sound familiar? Take a look

Al dear, have you thought of publishing? 🙂
Thank you Celestine 🙂 My work isn’t that good though
Twist!! will you write an epic conclusion?!?
I may well do. Will have to see what the prompts bring
Funny. Really an inside job. Lol
Haha definitely 🙂
Or…maybe they just actually lived there and the guy at the door got tired of waiting? How else would he have the key? …Oh there are other possibilities but it it illegal to enter your own home? I think the first guy might have already stolen the goods, displayed them and just liked to relive his triumph. Or maybe my brain cells are still frozen from being outside…
🙂
Haha … something that may make sense in weeks to come 🙂
OOh…have I sparked your grey matter or just confused you?
Not at all. Have you read Illegal Entry? One from two weeks ago? See any similarities?
I shall have to go back now…
Cliff-hanger, Al! This is great :). Malvin’s very credible. Can picture him at karaoke. Love your imagination 🙂
Thank you Noleen 🙂 I had no idea where this was going when I started writing it
Good one, Al. Now I want to know what they were going to steal and whether they got caught. 😀
Thanks Sylvia 🙂
hahahaha You got it done in time and very well done.
Thank you. Although it wrote itself, I decided I was going to do something so changed details of the companion 🙂
ha well it worked and hurry up and post new photo so I can write.
I will. It will be available at 4am here. What part of the US are you in, and I will tell you the time it will be available there
10 my time….so I will be awake.
Where are you? I thought you were in America.
I am….North Carolina. I am 6 hours behind you.
Ahhh. I see. You meant it will be 10 when it posts. I thought you meant it was 10 now lol
ha no. It is 8:52 now 🙂 Me can add…me is a teacher.
What do you teach? I am a teacher too. I teach life to my teen kids 😉
I teach 5 year olds EVERYTHING…plus I work with special needs children as well. So I am just a fountain of knowledge from which they sip.
Ok…I try to keep them from killing each other all day.
Haha 😀 What kind of special needs? My eldest has Asperger’s
ohhhh I have children with asperger, austism, ODD, apraxia, and other typically developed children who have behavior issues.
Must be rewarding but very tiring work then. And I am now off to bed.
Good night Anja.