I have another blog which is for Photo Fiction. Every week I post a photo that I have taken and use it as a prompt for stories, poems etc. The idea is to be in the region of 150 words. I thought I would take a break from the ongoing story of the invasion of a planet.
The Haunted Castle
The three of them broke into the castle. Cobwebs were everywhere. The last king died thirty years previously and left no heir, so the castle emptied of people until a relative turned up.
Of course, reports of ghosts became commonplace. Headless horsemen, wailing women wearing white, the king. They didn’t believe any of it though, figuring locals created the stories to frighten would-be treasure hunters. The three of them entered unperturbed anyway.
Going from room to room, they laughed as they defaced the walls using paint spray cans. One of them stopped having heard a sound. He raised his hand calling for quiet. Creeping around the corner, they found the winch to the well moving. The fear in them was palpable; they dropped their cans and ran, pushing themselves off walls to keep their speed up.
A sack moved and a man stood up, laughing as he untied the string.

Fear always gets the best of common sense! Well written entry!
Thank you 🙂
Nicely done Alastair. 🙂
Thanks LuAnn
And he’ll get away with it too until those darn kids show up! hehe. A fun read.
Hehe Thanks 🙂 I tried to make a couple of stories this week not about death and destruction. Have you seen the Ligo Haiburn Challenge on Nightlake’s blog?
Hmm. No I haven’t. I will check it out.
If it’s abandoned – it’s haunted!
Great story 🙂
Haha thanks 🙂
Your story reminds me of a current news story where three ‘lads’ where caught inside a ‘condemed’ building. What does the sign mean when it says: Do Not Enter. While your ‘guys’ got a good scaring – the ‘lads’ got caught by the police, because of an observant neighbor.
That is good news. Glad the neighbours <– hehe – didn't just sit back and ignore it
Creative story & interesting photo!
Thanks Cindy 🙂
Love it! What a great story! Castles are intriguing and beautiful and you haunted it up very nicely. I was so drawn in and then it ended on me! 🙂
🙂 Thanks Amber
Very nice story, Alastair! It reminds me of the stories I’ve read in childhood!
Thank you for sharing! Have a wonderful Sunday Alastair! 🙂
Thank you Stefania. Hope you have a good Sunday
Well written and how fun. As a kid when you go into old deserted buildings you are always certain that they are haunted! Nice one! 🙂
Thank you Penny 🙂
Ha! Serves them right. Nice story.
Thank you David 🙂
Love this! You continue to surprise! May need a few weeks to catch up!! 🙂
Sometimes I surprise even myself (although that’s not hard haha)
🙂
then what happened?????????
They ran away 😆 I ran out of words. I already had to make adjustments to lower it
lol. a very good one. Was the man a caretaker or a would-be treasure-hunter?
I think he was probably the caretaker 🙂
oh:) and also the photo this week is really very interesting
Thank you. It’s from inside Dover Castle
Nice on Alastair. Too bad we can’t do that more often to stop young idiots from defacing property.
Exactly. Maybe have a water cannon on the walls 😉